RB - Pitch Evalation

The feedback from our pitch was generally quite positive. However there were a few things we need to adress:

• The track is too long. 5 minutes is the maximum length the exam board will allow and ours is 5:30. We have a 2 points in the track where we can cut it. This is makes the track only 3 minutes and 50 seconds.
• We need to add examples and our own tested shot ideas into the pitch. To show the kind of feel were going for in the video.
• We need to come up with more ideas to keep the video interesting while at the same time not repeating anything.

Once we adress these issues the pitch will be given the green light and we will be allowed to begin filming.